Turn your ideas into powerful writing with help from Write of Passage's Dedicated Mentor
Trapped in a mind full of brilliant ideas with no reliable writing process?
You’ve got big ideas in your head. Meaningful experiences that deserve to be shared. Unique insights you know would benefit people.
But when you sit down to write, something frustrating happens...
Your thoughts scatter like dandelion seeds in the wind. What felt clear in your mind becomes a jumbled mess on the page. You start writing, but with so many possibilities and connections, you’re unable to see how pieces fit together.
Hours later, you're staring at fragments of brilliance with no coherent structure. Another draft abandoned. Another important insight left unexpressed. Another opportunity wasted.
To be fair, it is not your fault
I've seen it countless times: writers whose voices deserve to be heard get paralysed by the notion that "writing should flow naturally."
But the reality is that great writing doesn’t emerge without strategic and tactical planning.
Being buried under too many ideas, being stretched in myriad directions, is not evidence of failure. It means you have all the raw material for something truly great.
The difference between abandoned drafts and stellar published work is understanding the creative process and knowing how to use it.
The harsh reality of unfinished writing
Think back to an important idea you started writing about but never finished.
You had valuable things to share. And you knew it mattered. But as you lost your grip on the writing process, you fell into endless revision cycles without making progress. I know! I’ve been there!
That unfinished draft now languishes on your computer as a painful reminder of what remains unexpressed.
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What writing well feels like
Now imagine a different scenario.
Picture yourself sitting down to write and having a system for going from idea → published piece.
Your writing has clear direction. It has momentum. Each paragraph builds purposefully on the last. And your ideas finally have the impact they deserve.
Readers love your work. They comment, like, and share it. Now you’re building influence, making new friends and creating opportunities.
This is not a pipe dream. It’s entirely possible with the right creative know-how.
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BULLSH*T: "Good writing flows naturally if you have the talent."
It's not true, but many believe that expressing themselves in writing should happen easily.
But the truth is that even the most talented writers grapple with the structure of their thoughts and words. Legendary publisher and writer Kevin Kelly said “95% of writing is structure.”
It's not enough to have meaningful experiences; writing is a craft — more like building than birthing — and it requires specific knowledge, awareness, techniques and manoeuvres.
But here's the good news: all of this can be learned with the right support 👇
Introducing Creative Thought Partnership for your writing
It doesn't have to be so hard to express yourself. And I want to help.
Introducing my Creative Thought Partnership for nonfiction writers - personalised guidance you need to turn your most important ideas into opportunities through writing.
You will receive both strategic video analysis and tactical written feedback on your draft so that you can publish work you’re proud of.
Join hundreds of writers who’ve already benefited from my unique kind of feedback.
Why I created this service
As a graduate of the Royal College of Art and the Dedicated Writing Mentor at David Perell's Write of Passage, I've coached hundreds of people through their creative projects.
I've watched brilliant people struggle to share their most significant ideas. I've seen — and felt — how frustrating it is when writing doesn't match the clarity of your thinking.
That’s why I created this service. All I wanna do is write write write and coach other writers. It’s the best work I’ve ever done.
What people are saying
“Harrison, I wanted to let you know I was able to get out of the house and find a coffee shop to write for over an hour tonight. I completed a SFD [shitty first draft]. I really appreciate it!” — 🕺 Kevin Doffing, Company President
"Harrison is so much more than simply an "accountability" coach. He is a nimble, high-idea-generating, creative troubleshooter. He can weave effortlessly back and forth between strategy and tactics (and then zoom out, and operate at a level even more meta than that)! He loves the craft of writing and that enthusiasm comes through in every interaction." — 💃🏼 Jennifer Scott, Poet
"Harrison helped me overcome a creative block while I was rewriting a few essays. His questions—always rich and unexpected—pushed me to think and feel differently. He's the kind of person who opens your eyes to things you didn’t realize were missing. He especially brings such positive energy to writing. It’s contagious. Suddenly, something that felt like a grind becomes playful and, dare I say, fun. Perhaps that’s the most valuable thing Harrison has given me: the joy of writing again." — 🕺 Hugo Lebarrois, Product Manager
What's included in Creative Thought Partnership?
YOU WILL GET:
- Strategic Analysis 🎬 (video) - Deep insight into your work's foundation, identifying core themes and showing you exactly where to focus.
- Tactical Guidance 📑 (in-doc) - Practical, specific suggestions in your document margins, addressing structure, flow, language, and all that good stuff.
- 5-Day Turnaround 🗓️ - Get your feedback within 5 business days so you can maintain your creative momentum
Hey 👨🎨 My style's not for everyone! So preview before you buy! I publish sample video analyses (with clients’ permission) on my Substack publication, so you can see how the process works before submitting your writing.
Ready to get started? Here are the steps
- Step 1: Buy this service
- Step 2: You'll then be prompted to upload your draft and complete the short form
- Step 3: You will receive your personalised feedback within 5 business days
More of what people are saying
"Harrison absolutely aced the editor "exam" during our training (60/60), and has helped two cohorts of students around a range of technical and psychological blocks. His experience in art school enables him to give a perspective shift to anyone he works with." — 🕺 Michael Dean, Editor-in-Chief at Write of Passage
"Think of a sounding board, but better - like an intellectual creativity board. That’s one of the many talents Harrison offers in the writing world: he stimulates, nurtures, and empowers the creative inside of you. From high level brainstorming to practical tips on language and structure, his guidance would be a huge advantage to anyone looking to take their writing to the next level." — 🕺 Michael Skinner, Entrepreneur
“When I began working with Harrison as a mentee, I felt overwhelmed, lost, and uncertain about my creative path. I was working on an application for my first artist's residency, submitting an ambitious project that I struggled to communicate clearly to my audience. Harrison went above and beyond every step of the way. His mentorship helped me not only clarify the core concepts behind my project but also find confidence in my own voice and perspectives. Through his guidance, I learned new ways to approach my writing process—from initial ideas to execution—helping me feel more organized and focused. Harrison continuously showed up for me as a mentor, and beyond practical advice, I have felt genuine companionship in our work together, navigating the joys and frustrations of writing.” — 🕺 Jeremy Mathew, Artist
“Harrison’s guidance came at a moment where I was transitioning in my creative journey. After completing the "Write of Passage" bootcamp, I felt overwhelmed by the sheer amount of feedback and the realization of how much I needed to work on. I felt lost feeling the pressure to quickly revamp what writing process I thought I had. Harrison’s approach to nonfiction writing was a much-needed change of pace. He made real the idea of playfulness and patience, transforming what felt like a giant, overwhelming task into flexible, bitesize explorations every week. Watching him write alongside us and seeing others similarly struggle made the journey feel human and achievable. My encounter with Harrison, planted the seeds for me becoming a more open and resilient writer.” — 🕺 See Eun Ma, Entrepreneur
“Working with Harrison was invaluable in helping me identify my writing weaknesses. He was able to shine a light on why some of my writing wasn't working. This has made a huge difference, as I now understand what I need to improve on and work on the most. He's a nice guy, fun to work with, and is really interested in being as helpful as possible. I definitely recommend Harrison as excellent in his space, and he will help you improve your writing skills dramatically.” — 🕺 Owen Fitzpatrick, Psychologist & Author
"Harrison is a discerning, collaborative, and attentive creative partner. He’s helped me out with my writing for over a year now and I just know that whatever piece I’m working on will be a few notches better once it’s got a ‘Harrison pass’. He’s also incredibly resourceful, being able to pull in a variety of prompts and references from his ever-growing library." — 💃🏼 Becky Isjwara, Artist & writer
"When you call out things I didn't notice and when you put on your mentoring hat, I honestly feel like you have a lot of great ideas, Harrison, and you really have a good understanding of the craft because of your experience." — 🕺 Linart Seprioto, Marketing Manager
“The most valuable aspect of working with you was discussing new ideas and getting new thoughts about things I didn't even think of checking. You made me realize that I don't write badly, I just frame it badly and overcomplicate it. Now I'm trying to be more straight-forward with my writing first, and add details and jokes only when it's necessary.” — 🕺 Matheus Felipe, Consultant
“Harrison helped me clarify my thinking much earlier in the writing process. His Strategic Questions have become a go-to tool I use after a first draft to catch logic gaps before getting too deep into revisions.” — 🕺 Ved Shankar, Consultant
"I worked with Harrison on a draft that was giving me fits. He left me with two vital and memorable pieces of feedback: 1) list on a separate page all key themes/topics discussed in the piece and focus on the 2-3 that are the heart of your draft. 2) Instead of editing the current piece, start over with those 2-3 key themes—what! It worked. My next draft was focused, clearer, and cleaner, allowing me to get to the heart of what I wanted to write. Harrison is an enjoyable, thoughtful, and clear communicator that will make you and your writing better." — 🕺 Brandon Lee Weaver, Writer
"I went from a mess of ideas to writing pieces that connected with people. Harrison has a skill and approach to bring out the best in your writing. I've seen this improve in my writing and how I work with teams." — 🕺 Dominik Gmeiner, Senior Design Leader
"The value of your coaching comes from those moments that are difficult to replicate alone. It could be that writing 'reps' are almost as effective alone as they are with a coach. But those 'aha' moments that happen during conversation are unique. Just bouncing ideas gave me access to a part of my brain that is usually difficult to access alone." — 🕺 Justin Nothling, Entrepreneur
"One eagerly awaits additional commendations.” — 👸 Queen Elizabeth, Contemporary Monarch
Money-back guarantee
If you don't find my feedback valuable for improving your writing, I'll work with you to revise my approach until you're satisfied.
If you’re still not happy and want your money back, I’ll refund you straightaway.
Your FAQs answered
Q: WHAT KINDS OF WRITING CAN I GET FEEDBACK ON? AND IS THERE A WORD COUNT?
A: I can give feedback on any nonfiction writing — from essays to OpEds to personal stories and everything in between. The word count is 1500 words. This service is not suitable for fiction writing.
Q: HOW LONG DO YOU SPEND WORKING ON A DRAFT?
A: I like to spend up to 90 minutes working on a single draft. I read slowly and deeply, often going away and coming back a day or two later so that I can provide the most well-considered feedback possible.
Q: IS THIS JUST BASIC EDITING AND PROOFREADING?
A: No, not at all. While I'll certainly note language issues, my primary focus is on helping you find the underlying structure in your complex material, turning scattered insights into a coherent piece that resonates with your readers.
Q: I'M WRITING ABOUT DEEPLY PERSONAL EXPERIENCES. WILL THIS HELP?
A: Absolutely. I specialise in helping writers articulate meaningful personal experiences. The more significant the material is to you, the more valuable this service will be.
If you've got further questions, you can email me.
Creative Thought Partnership is perfect for you if...
…your internal clarity does not translate to the page.
…you know what you want to say but you need help organising it.
…your ideas are so interconnected that they resist linear presentation.
…you're tired of generic writing advice that doesn't address your specific challenges.
…you're ready to develop a clearer process for writing that is impactful and repeatable.
Start turning your ideas into impactful writing
If you buy this service you will get:
- Strategic Video Analysis - Personalised insight into the "what," "how," and "why" of your piece
- Tactical Document Markup - Specific guidance on structure, flow, and language
- Deep, Reflective Analysis - Uncover the hidden patterns and connections in your writing
- 5-Day Turnaround - Maintain your creative momentum
- Satisfaction Guarantee - Try it risk free
FOR A TOTAL INVESTMENT OF ONLY $149.99.
"You can. You should. And if you have the courage to begin, you will." — Stephen King
You will get strategic video guidance and tactical document markup on your draft (up to 1500 words) from the Write of Passage's Dedicated Writing Mentor, so that you can finally organise your most important ideas into writing that makes an impact.